Time Capsule (Part 2 of 2)

   Hello people from the future I’m Noah Campbell, I live with 4 other family members. My father Quentin, my mother Dana, my sister Danaya, my brother Bronson. I go to Blackville school but i lived in the Gray Rapids. I drive four wheelers, dirt bikes and in the Winter when there's snow we drive snowmobiles. Also a lot of people drive outboard motors on the river in the spring when the waters high.


  In our community it’s kinda similar to what i do because a lot of people drive four wheelers and stuff. Also i Live in the Province of New Brunswick and there discussing if if they want to put the pipeline in but there not sure if they're gonna, a lot of people don't want to because it hurts the environment. But we need jobs so i think that they might go through with it.

   What’s happening the world now right now is there is a terrorist group called ISIS and they are killing people and videoing it sending it to the new stations. But they won’t take action because they don’t want to start another war, but if you ask me “i would say kill every last one of them”. Hope the future is awesome, I wish i could stay around to see it. Sincerely, Noah Campbell

Time Capsule (Part 1 of 2)

Cell Phone: I think my cell phone would be a good one because there's all the news of today's age. Also it would give them an idea of what life was like for us as teens.It can also show them how we communicated with each other though text and phone calls.

Outboard motors: I would put a boat and motor in the time capsule because in the future there will more jet propelled boats than prop. If they put them in there then they would know how we used to travel the river.

Money: I'll be surprised if coin money is still around that far in the future. But if it is then they will get to see what money used to look like. But I think in the future, it'll be all about that electronic cash.
Newspapers: To see what the latest news was in our time. They could compare that to there history. Also newspaper will probably not be around it will be all digital.

Light bulb: The light bulb is always changing and it's hard to say how big the change will be in a 100 years, Compared to our old standard light bulb.

My New Bike

It was Jerry the Giraffe’s birthday. He got a new bike that was a bright green colour.

Jerry couldn't believe how shiny it was! He couldn't wait to drive it.

Jerry calls down to his grandmother Beth's house and says, "Hey Grandma I'm coming down to show you my new bike!"

Beth replies with "Sure hunny, I can't wait to see it"

But Jerry didn’t test the bike out before he got on it. He was coming down the hill to go to his grandma Beth's and when he got to the bottom of the hill all Beth could hear was "ahhhh I have no brakes".

Beth couldn't do anything to help her grandson but roar! He's headed right for the brook and SPLASH he landed right in the brook. But luckily he was a giraffe or he would have drowned.      

What happens now? And in the dialogue discuss what happened to the bike with Beth - he should have looked the bike over.

Message: Beth could remind him to always check over his bike to make sure it is safe before he uses it.

Tips on written stories for children

1. The part I found particularly helpful is when it said that at the end of the page ask some sort a a question so that the reader will turn to the next page.

2. Its similar in the way that there both very descriptive and short pieces of written.

3. The parts i found helpful was were it was telling you about how you can write different dialogue paragraphs.

4. I think there should be a rubric on how good the story line was.

Children stories

The Halloween House:

1. The main characters is Suzie which is a 4 year old little girl, Picador her little chihuahua and her teddy bear that comes to life at the end.

2. The only dialogue in this story is a part in the story that describes monster tapping on the door and is goes like "Tap, tap....tap".

3. The problem in this story is that theres monsters come to Suzie house while she's sleeping. So the teddy bear turns into a real life grizzly bear and scares all the monsters away.

4. The problem was resolved by the teddy bear scaring monsters and now they will will never come back again.

5. I readed the the other story called "Atlas Hangs On" and there not really similar because one is about monsters and the other one is about Atlas not letting go.  

6. I think that it would be appealing to young children because Its short and theres a lot of pictures to help them understand whats going on.

How to article

How to change the spark plug in a 2002 or under snowmobile:

Step 1: Go to any auto parts store or sometimes any convinces stores and ask them for at the maximum 3 spark plugs with the part number BR9ES or BR9YA it doesn't matter it's just what ever you prefer.

Step 2: Open the cab take all the spark plugs out and which ever ones are black on the tip or wet the replace it with a new one.

Step 3: Put every thing back on and start the snowmobile.

Step 4: Let it idle for for 1-2 minutes then drive.

Blog Entry (How to...)

The key to having a Great how to article would be having lots of detail in each of the steps, because the more detailed it is then it gets more clear to the reader and less questions. The how to article that i looked at was a great how to article because it was well written and the picture would have help a lot for someone that didn't know what to do. But i don't think he can make any improvements to it.
http://www.wikihow.com/Change-Oil-on-a-Yamaha-450-YZF-Dirtbike 

I would mark this article using the rubric i would give it a 20 out of 20.