The 5 best Bacon cheeseburgers

Bacon cheeseburgers

Kate's take-out: I love Kate's the best because i never once went there where the burgers weren't good and fresh.

Parks: I love Parks burgers too but they put too much mustard on them.

Estey's: The burgers are great only thing is there greasy.

Trio: I liked them but one or two burgers I had was a bit dry.

Hooked and cooked: I eat there just the once and my burger was burn and had no bacon on it.

Grammer Exercise

1. The team won (its) (it's) game. Did you win (yours) (your's), (to)(too) (two)?
2. They left (their) (there) books (there) (their) (they're).
3. I hear (your) (you're) about to graduate.
4. Its) (It's) nice that (there) (their) (they're) friendly.
5. Although I get (alot) (a lot) of colds, I feel (all right) (alright) now.
6. (Whose) (Who's) prettier (then) (than) you?
7. Are you tired? I'm out of (breathe) (breath), (too) (to) (two).
8. Run back and (fourth) (forth) from (hear) (here) to (their) (there).
9. (Your) (You're) about to (loose) (lose) (your) (you're) book.
10. Everyone will (accept) (except) the prize (accept) (except) you.
11. Do you know (weather) (whether) or not he will give me the prize?
12. Many people (choose) (chose) to live in large cities.
13. Is the doctor (through) (thorough) (threw) with my exam?
14. What (affect) (effect) does the school (principle) (principal) have on you?
15. What did he (advice) (advise) you to do? Did you take his (advice)(advise)?
16. (There) (Their) (They're) are (alot) (a lot) of (your) you're) friends in the boat.
17. I will (buy) (by) a book (buy) (by) Ray Bradbury.

• The team won it's game. Did you win yours, too?
• They left their books there. 
• I hear you're about to graduate. 
• It's nice that they're friendly. 
• Although I get a lot of colds, I feel alright now. 
• Who's prettier than you? Are you tired? I'm out of breath, too. 
• Run back and forth from here to there. 
• You're about to lose your book. 
• Everyone will accept the prize except you. 
• Do you know whether or not he will give me the prize? 
• Many people choose to live in large cities. 
• Is the doctor through with my exam? 
• What affect does the school principal have on you? 
• What did he advise you to do? 
• Did you take his advice? 
• There are a lot of your friends in the boat. 
• I will buy a book by Ray Bradbury.

Time Capsule (Part 2 of 2)

   Hello people from the future I’m Noah Campbell, I live with 4 other family members. My father Quentin, my mother Dana, my sister Danaya, my brother Bronson. I go to Blackville school but i lived in the Gray Rapids. I drive four wheelers, dirt bikes and in the Winter when there's snow we drive snowmobiles. Also a lot of people drive outboard motors on the river in the spring when the waters high.


  In our community it’s kinda similar to what i do because a lot of people drive four wheelers and stuff. Also i Live in the Province of New Brunswick and there discussing if if they want to put the pipeline in but there not sure if they're gonna, a lot of people don't want to because it hurts the environment. But we need jobs so i think that they might go through with it.

   What’s happening the world now right now is there is a terrorist group called ISIS and they are killing people and videoing it sending it to the new stations. But they won’t take action because they don’t want to start another war, but if you ask me “i would say kill every last one of them”. Hope the future is awesome, I wish i could stay around to see it. Sincerely, Noah Campbell

Time Capsule (Part 1 of 2)

Cell Phone: I think my cell phone would be a good one because there's all the news of today's age. Also it would give them an idea of what life was like for us as teens.It can also show them how we communicated with each other though text and phone calls.

Outboard motors: I would put a boat and motor in the time capsule because in the future there will more jet propelled boats than prop. If they put them in there then they would know how we used to travel the river.

Money: I'll be surprised if coin money is still around that far in the future. But if it is then they will get to see what money used to look like. But I think in the future, it'll be all about that electronic cash.
Newspapers: To see what the latest news was in our time. They could compare that to there history. Also newspaper will probably not be around it will be all digital.

Light bulb: The light bulb is always changing and it's hard to say how big the change will be in a 100 years, Compared to our old standard light bulb.

My New Bike

It was Jerry the Giraffe’s birthday. He got a new bike that was a bright green colour.

Jerry couldn't believe how shiny it was! He couldn't wait to drive it.

Jerry calls down to his grandmother Beth's house and says, "Hey Grandma I'm coming down to show you my new bike!"

Beth replies with "Sure hunny, I can't wait to see it"

But Jerry didn’t test the bike out before he got on it. He was coming down the hill to go to his grandma Beth's and when he got to the bottom of the hill all Beth could hear was "ahhhh I have no brakes".

Beth couldn't do anything to help her grandson but roar! He's headed right for the brook and SPLASH he landed right in the brook. But luckily he was a giraffe or he would have drowned.      

What happens now? And in the dialogue discuss what happened to the bike with Beth - he should have looked the bike over.

Message: Beth could remind him to always check over his bike to make sure it is safe before he uses it.

Tips on written stories for children

1. The part I found particularly helpful is when it said that at the end of the page ask some sort a a question so that the reader will turn to the next page.

2. Its similar in the way that there both very descriptive and short pieces of written.

3. The parts i found helpful was were it was telling you about how you can write different dialogue paragraphs.

4. I think there should be a rubric on how good the story line was.

Children stories

The Halloween House:

1. The main characters is Suzie which is a 4 year old little girl, Picador her little chihuahua and her teddy bear that comes to life at the end.

2. The only dialogue in this story is a part in the story that describes monster tapping on the door and is goes like "Tap, tap....tap".

3. The problem in this story is that theres monsters come to Suzie house while she's sleeping. So the teddy bear turns into a real life grizzly bear and scares all the monsters away.

4. The problem was resolved by the teddy bear scaring monsters and now they will will never come back again.

5. I readed the the other story called "Atlas Hangs On" and there not really similar because one is about monsters and the other one is about Atlas not letting go.  

6. I think that it would be appealing to young children because Its short and theres a lot of pictures to help them understand whats going on.

How to article

How to change the spark plug in a 2002 or under snowmobile:

Step 1: Go to any auto parts store or sometimes any convinces stores and ask them for at the maximum 3 spark plugs with the part number BR9ES or BR9YA it doesn't matter it's just what ever you prefer.

Step 2: Open the cab take all the spark plugs out and which ever ones are black on the tip or wet the replace it with a new one.

Step 3: Put every thing back on and start the snowmobile.

Step 4: Let it idle for for 1-2 minutes then drive.

Blog Entry (How to...)

The key to having a Great how to article would be having lots of detail in each of the steps, because the more detailed it is then it gets more clear to the reader and less questions. The how to article that i looked at was a great how to article because it was well written and the picture would have help a lot for someone that didn't know what to do. But i don't think he can make any improvements to it.
http://www.wikihow.com/Change-Oil-on-a-Yamaha-450-YZF-Dirtbike 

I would mark this article using the rubric i would give it a 20 out of 20.

The 100

Film Review

Finding Forrester is a 2000 Columbia Pictures film written by Mike Rich and directed by Gus Van Sant. Its a inspiring film about an African-American teenager, Jamal Wallace, is invited to attend a prestigious private high school. By chance, Jamal be friends a reclusive writer, the man in the window and his name is William Forrester , through whom he refines his talent for writing and comes to terms with his identity.

William Forrester (Sean Connery) and Jamal (Rob Brown) are two very different people with very different backgrounds. William Forrester wrote the book "American Novel". He mostly stays in his apartment throughout the film. Jamal is from the Bronx and he's 16 year old boy who is a very good at literature. In the beginning of the film Jamal is offered a spot in a private school. Once at this school he meets a girl and William helps Jamal throughout the movie and a tight bond is grown between the two of them.

     If I was going to compare this novel to another novel i would compare it to the book we read in English this year it is "To Kill a Mockingbird". I thought the characters were quite alike because they both preferred to stay inside there home. It was like they didn't like meeting people it seemed like they were both scared of them and make new friends. I also compared Jamal Wallace to Scout and Jem . I think characters are alike because Jamal is wondering why he is being judged by Professor. They he finally realized it was because of his color. In “To Kill a Mockingbird” Jem and Scout were trying to understand why Tom Robinson was judged and it was also because of his color.
   
     The main message of the film is reaching your dreams and  not giving up on them  because in the film William is helping Jamal with his writing in school and he shows him to not give up on the world or dreams. William did help him became a recluse and realized his failures but were able to get over them.

Fast and Furious 7 Film Review

That review that I read was "Screen Rant" by Sandy Schaefer I liked the review a lot because it was very nicely worded. It was also good that she talked about Paul Walker and how the people did such a great job hiding that it was his brother and that they gave him his own part of the movie to kinda give his fair wells to everyone.

But one thing I didn't enjoy was that she was kinda saying that this movie only for people that liked cars but it did have the scenes with Paul Walker in them and he stared on more shows that just fast and furious and the in the movie he was sending a good bye scene to everyone. 

Descriptive Writing

I couldn’t believe it. I was here at the competition in Sussex for snowboarding in March. It was my birthday present, and brought three of my friends Drake, Alex, and Marshall we couldn’t wait until the competition started. So we could see our favorite boarder named Mark, McMorris, he was in the olympics and he was coming to sussex. It was started you hear them coming up the hill in the ski lift and feeling the cool march wind blow up against you with a little smell of BQQ from the people at the bottom cooking. They started down the slope he was coming down with huge speed and wipeout right in front of us from trying to rail ride and flipped. But surprising he got back up but it looked like he was limping, but he got back up and barely made it down the hill. He said his leg was shooting pain right up though his back. The ambulances check him out and his leg was broken. Also he came in second and he told the channel 5 news that he was quitting snowboarding for 2 months. Our little trip to Sussex turn into a huge deal but it turned out to be one of the worst days, because our favorite boarder of all time broke his leg and quit snowboarding.

Writing Inventory

On my spare time I do not write, but i do usually watch Netflix, drive my four wheeler or snowmobile, or go down to Marshals and play pool. My favorite writer is Peter. D. Clark because he is a write from New Brunswick and he tells the stories about New Brunswicks history. My favorite type of writing expository pieces. The type of writing that's challenging for me is persuasive writing because you need facts and quotes. I get my ideas for writing from what happends to me in my everyday life. I’m not currently writing any assignments other than this. I am not a very good writer so i not very pround of any of my writing pieces. When i produce a piece of writing I normally make one draft. I think my strength as a writer is that i have lots of voice. My weakness as a writer would probably be that i don't have much sentence structure. My favorite subject to write about is a personal narrative and my second choice would be descriptive paragraph. My goals for this semester is to pass everything with good marks and my expectations for this course is to do a lot of writing on the computers.