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I couldn’t believe it. I was here at the competition in Sussex for snowboarding in March. It was my birthday present, and brought three of my friends Drake, Alex, and Marshall we couldn’t wait until the competition started. So we could see our favorite boarder named Mark, McMorris, he was in the olympics and he was coming to sussex. It was started you hear them coming up the hill in the ski lift and feeling the cool march wind blow up against you with a little smell of BQQ from the people at the bottom cooking. They started down the slope he was coming down with huge speed and wipeout right in front of us from trying to rail ride and flipped. But surprising he got back up but it looked like he was limping, but he got back up and barely made it down the hill. He said his leg was shooting pain right up though his back. The ambulances check him out and his leg was broken. Also he came in second and he told the channel 5 news that he was quitting snowboarding for 2 months. Our little trip to Sussex turn into a huge deal but it turned out to be one of the worst days, because our favorite boarder of all time broke his leg and quit snowboarding.